Monday, December 13, 2004

end it for me...

if sorrow is a candle light, blow it out for me...

if happiness is a breathe of air, infuse it in me...

if pain is a fallen leaf, leave it there for me...

if love is a treasure chest, unlock it for me...

if u ever choose to stay, be it always right beside me...

if it's eternal goodbye...


Is there anyone who would wanna finish up this poem for me? all versions are welcomed!

-I changed it slightly, now I feel it sounds more smooth. And my own ending for it, I've already thought of it.

If it is eternal goodbye, hope it's as silent as can be...